Foliage Plants in Banks

Nov 13, 2015 12:10
There usually are foliage plants in Japanese banks.

In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponding to the average height of Japanese men.

The reason for this is because you can measure the height of robbers when a bank robbery happens.

Besides, there are also some anti-crime measures, for example, there are no toilets in banks.
銀行の観葉植物

日本の銀行には、よく観葉植物が置いてあります。

しかも、その高さはほとんど170cmで、この数字はおよそ日本人男性の平均身長に相当します。

この理由は、銀行強盗に入られたときに、犯人の身長を測るためです。

その他にも、銀行にはトイレを設置していないなど、幾つかの防犯対策がとられています。
No. 1　Danny's correction
  • There usually are foliage plants in Japanese banks.
  • There is usually are foliage plants in Japanese banks.
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponding to the average height of Japanese men.
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is are 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponding corresponds to with the average height of Japanese men.
    　You are using incorrect verb forms.
  • The reason for this is because you can measure the height of robbers when a bank robbery happens.
  • The reason for this is because so that you one can measure the height of robbers when a bank robbery happens.
  • Besides, there are also some anti-crime measures, for example, there are no toilets in banks.
  • Besides, there are also some anti-crime measures,; for example, there are no toilets in banks.
    　Not sure if toilets is the word you meant to use.
kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post! :D
Danny
You're welcome!
No. 2　Jesse's correction
  • There usually are foliage plants in Japanese banks.
  • There are usually plants in Japanese banks. (Foliage is another name for plants, so you wouldn't have to say both.)
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponding to the average height of Japanese men.
  • In addition, almost all of the plants are 170 cm in height, and this figure corresponds to the average height of Japanese men.
  • The reason for this is because you can measure the height of robbers when a bank robbery happens.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • Besides, there are also some anti-crime measures, for example, there are no toilets in banks.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
kanotown
Thank you so much for correcting me! :D
Jesse
no problem :)
No. 3　outdoors's correction
  • Foliage Plants in Banks
  • Foliage Plants in Banks
    　I didn't know "foliage plants" was a word, but you are right. http://gardening.about.com/od/choosingperennialplants/tp/Top-Foliage-Plants.htm
  • There usually are foliage plants in Japanese banks.
  • This sentence is perfect! No correction needed!
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponding to the average height of Japanese men.
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponds to the average height of Japanese men.
    　Again, very good. I looked up "corresponds to" and "corresponds with" and you are correct..
  • Besides, there are also some anti-crime measures, for example, there are no toilets in banks.
  • Besides this, there are also some other anti-crime measures; for example, there are no toilets in banks.
    　You're right. I don't think there are toilets in U.S. banks either. I hadn't thought that it was an anti-crime measure. This is why the restrooms in the subway are often closed (to prevent terrorism).
outdoors
  • In addition, almost all of the plants is 170 cm in height, and this figure is corresponds to the average height of Japanese men.

    Again, very good. I looked up "corresponds to" and "corresponds with" and you are correct..

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kanotown
Thank you very much for correcting my post!
I'm glad about your informative comments. :)
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